After Feedback

This is my final design. After, i done my 1st draft i got some feedback.

That feedback was ;

• Didnt like the cow like logo 
• random white star
• unreadable typography.
• liked character
• colour scheme is good
• good idea with activity on back 
• attetion to detail (barcoding, ingredients) 

After my feedback i edited my box. I found out that changing the logo looked alot better and alot more easier to read. With the star, i got rid of the white background and did a transparent and made it more 3d so it stands out a little bit. For the unreadable writing, I spaced the letters out a little bit more so its easier to read.

I think if i could of spent some more time on this project,  i would of spent more time on making teh project. I spent alot of time doing research and making my character just not on the rest of the box.

The 2 things i think i did well was present my sketchbook and making my character, he is a really friendly looking character and grabs childrens attention.