Tuesday, 12 October 2010

Crit :)


Crit
Was the first one!  

First Panorama

Bad
Bit of ghosting
Made life difficult
Avoid bending
Obvious floors

Good
Really good edits
Good location

Second Panorama

Bad
Bad ending
Bad choice of theme

Good
Not as many floors as other one
Good idea of car different places

Third Panorama

Bad
Joining bad editing
Random white line
Bad editing

Good
Better picture
More focused picture

 I think I could of spent more time on editing and finish off the panorama itself, the ending on all of 3 was the down side which I didn’t really finish until the last day. However I think the concept and theme behind stuck really well. The theme being about me, Pan1 being generally about cars. Pan2 was all about my car and Pan3 my house, my road. 

 

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